Awake to view the rising sun
A blessed gift of day begun
As birds proclaim a symphony
A fall into sweet harmony
Heavens move in visions grace
A drawing into Your embrace
A whispers call from deep within
With gratitude of praise begin
A turn unto the one true light
Adjusting lens within Your sight
“As birds proclaim a symphony A fall into sweet harmony” Beautifully written 🙂
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“A turn unto the one true light
Adjusting lens within Your sight.” Would we could all see it.
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The two-line stanzas, together with a strong sensory appeal and rapid progression to a climax, made this effective and uplifting for me. Well done!!
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